Can someone please rate my audition materials?

My audition video

https://youtu.be/0D3g-l9FWf4?si=JNf3xIcXL9SX5TS_ Can someone please rate my audition video for the schools? It’s just a bit hard to look on myself and rate. Here is also the pictures. I’m 16(born in 2008) height 177 weight 59(last year wasn’t accepted anywhere and I was 173 64)